John Grisham’s Latest Camino Installment is Dull and Anticlimactic
I just finished reading Camino Ghosts from John Grisham. It’s the third version of this plucky group of literary nerds who summer on an island (Camino) off the Atlantic side of Florida. Grisham doesn’t do a lot of serial type books. He doesn’t have a hero the way Lee Child (Jack Reacher) or Michael Connelly (Harry Bosch) do. But the subject matter is as different as the pacing. Jake Brigance from A Time To Kill would be his closest serial. He’s done 3 stories that I’m aware of. But Brigance isn’t exactly racing around the globe rescuing hostages or fomenting revolution in a South American country.
He’s basically a pro bono lawyer in a country town in
Southern Mississippi. Not exactly riveting stuff. It’s great story telling though.
I enjoyed the small-town politics and legal wrangling. We learn how the system
works and how it doesn’t. We root for the accused.
The Camino stories don’t have the same rich texture. It
feels like I should care more about the people in it, but I don’t.
Breakdown and Criticism
Camino Ghosts would have been better as a short story. The
first 1/3 felt like an interesting yarn, so I kept going. It flattened out and
settled to the bottom like week old Coca Cola after that. The last third was rushed through and
summarized like a made for TV movie stuffing in an ending right before a commercial
break. It’s almost like he got halfway done doing research and decided it
wasn’t worth his time and handed it off to a junior writer to finish by the
deadline.
The most compelling thing about the Camino Island crew is
how fun it would be to live there and go to their parties. Telling stories
about a small group of boozy eccentrics is what holds this series together. The eager
book seller (Bruce Cable) with the big contacts and the young author/professor
Mercer Mann and her new husband Thomas. A crew of fellow writers and retired
busybodies fills out the rest of the island set. Written in an easy, breezy
style, their life on the island is focused on books and causes.
Outline Summary
In the early 17th century, an unknown village in
West Africa is raided and the people are sold as slaves by another tribe. Both
slave traders and raiding party’s treat the villagers horribly. The women are
raped and beaten. The men are either killed outright or separated from the
women on the march to the sea. The conditions on the ships are even worse. Stiflingly
hot and disease ridden, many die in the tight airless spaces before the ship
arrives with its slaves. One particular ship crashes near Florida in a storm.
The captured Africans revolt against their captors and escape to a tiny island,
Dark Isle. The White slavers are executed in a voodoo ceremony by a captured
woman named Nalla. The curse, White men can never set foot on the island and
live to tell about it.
Lovely Jackson is the last descendent of the people from Dark Isle. She moved to Camino Island when she was just 15. No one has lived there since. The island is hers. A big developer wants to set up condos on the island but needs permission from the state of Florida. Lovely claims ownership. Tidal Breeze, the developer, needs to disprove her theory of ownership. They have a lot of money and powerful friends. Lovely has the crew from Camino and their vast eclectic mix of writers and environmental lawyers designed to stop corporate development. She needs to prove she owns it to stop the builders.
Any description of the slave trade and its barbarity should
force a kind of revulsion in the reader. This description is no different. It’s
partly what made me think the story would take rough ride like the crossing
that the slave ship endured. Mostly it devolved into a dull summation of the
legal questions and Lovely’s memory. The stakes were very low. I kept thinking
that the worst case scenario was the developers win the case to build on the
island and Lovely dies a few years later. She was in her 80s. It’s not exactly
a disaster.
Conservation Angle
For all the camaraderie of the liberal writing crew and
their desire to keep the greedy bastards out, someone developed the island they
live on. I never fully sympathize with conservationists; most already have
their property. The attitude is always, go find your piece of land somewhere
else. They love to move in the middle of nowhere and keep everyone else out. I
understand the impetus, no one wants a highway or an apartment building near
their spread, but it’s not “evil” or “corrupt” to want to develop. In either
case, we root for Lovely and the protection of her homeland. Grisham makes a
good case legally and emotionally that’s easy for the reader to follow.
I wonder if John Grisham made the connection that Bruce and Mercer and Thomas and the crew were helping themselves more than Lovely. They wouldn't have wanted the development any more than her. For all of their efforts, the real winners would be the ones who live on Camino Island.
Conclusion
Hoping for a quick end to the story after getting halfway
through is a sign your book is too boring. In the end I just didn’t care. It
was like being promised an action packed movie with violence and ancient curses
and being shown some old photos of the island instead. Not exactly a bait and
switch, but it was much flatter than promised.